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Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr
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Drunklight Beta Tester Joined: Sat Jan 10, 2009 10:15 pm Posts: 3	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr this is definetly one of the best stories i've read with one exception: its too short i have to agree with alot of other posters begging you to turn this into a novel
Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:33 pm

snapp3r Beta Tester Joined: Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:56 am Posts: 255 Steam Gamer Name: \|UKMD\| Snapp3r	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr After reading that, I have only 3 letters to comment with. OMG. That has to be one the most gripping reads I've read in a while. All of the mystery builds up the tension, and each paragraph, hell, each line is placed so well, I can't stop reading. I'm dissapointed there isn't any more of it, but you had me hooked from beggining to end. It was a pleasure reading it. _________________
Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:37 pm

Yatteri Joined: Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:32 am Posts: 35 Location: Canada	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr Absolutely fascinating and an excellent read. At the end of the first part, I was beginning to develop an emotional attachment to Doc Solace, only to find out the poor man was struck by lightning, ultimately dying for his beliefs. I was sad to see him go... and then BAM! Part 3! WOW! What an ending! The story development with all of the sub-plots and characters was just excellent. I did not want this to end... I feel like this ought to be a novel! And I feel like there should be references to Avatar / Solace / the first 'First Citizen' Harriet Wilkins in-game. This is just fantastic and adds a completely new dynamic to the game. Story development and plot are sort of lacking in GA atm (well, after the tutorial, anyway) Again I say this is excellent. I want more. _________________
Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:41 am

Sycarius Joined: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:20 pm Posts: 2298 Location: Near HiRez :)	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr I'm looking forward to this being "fleshed out" in-game with Sandstorm and future updates. I'd like to have a massive fight with Markov. I'd also like for Solace to become "self aware" of the monster he created. _________________ Signature by -Nomad-
Tue Mar 23, 2010 8:22 pm

RealityMine Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:37 am Posts: 8	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr we're going to have Dr. Solace in-game you think?
Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:26 am

Galizur Joined: Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:37 am Posts: 36 Steam Gamer Name: Akrasjel Lanate	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr Awesome
Wed May 26, 2010 2:49 pm

Coldkill Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:30 am Posts: 2	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr Absolutely brilliant! The ending was fantastic, really enjoyed the series.
Fri May 28, 2010 5:21 pm

GotBanned Beta Tester Joined: Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:33 am Posts: 15 Steam Gamer Name: Shady	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr Can we please get a Global Agenda novel? I just know it would be one of those books I literally don't stop reading until its finished.
Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:15 am

HiRezDuke Hi-Rez Team Member Joined: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:07 pm Posts: 5244 Location: Hi-Rez	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr Epic wrote: Can we please get a Global Agenda novel? I just know it would be one of those books I literally don't stop reading until its finished. Not exactly a novel, but check out what Andur has done over here: viewtopic.php?f=127&t=16572
Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:42 am

vindicated16 Joined: Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:54 pm Posts: 19	Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr that was absolutely an awesome story!luvvved it!i hope there will be more! oh and by the way i dont think agatha died.....isnt she in global agendas launch trailer? _________________ Me, myself, and I are sick and tired of all these other multiple personalities in our head, mooching off our brain power. We've decided to start charging rent."
Tue May 03, 2011 5:06 pm

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Drunklight

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Joined: Sat Jan 10, 2009 10:15 pm
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Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

this is definetly one of the best stories i've read with one exception: its too short

i have to agree with alot of other posters begging you to turn this into a novel

Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:33 pm

snapp3r

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Joined: Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:56 am
Posts: 255
Steam Gamer Name: |UKMD| Snapp3r

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

After reading that, I have only 3 letters to comment with.

OMG.

That has to be one the most gripping reads I've read in a while. All of the mystery builds up the tension, and each paragraph, hell, each line is placed so well, I can't stop reading. I'm dissapointed there isn't any more of it, but you had me hooked from beggining to end. It was a pleasure reading it.

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Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:37 pm

Yatteri

Joined: Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:32 am
Posts: 35
Location: Canada

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

Absolutely fascinating and an excellent read.

At the end of the first part, I was beginning to develop an emotional attachment to Doc Solace, only to find out the poor man was struck by lightning, ultimately dying for his beliefs. I was sad to see him go... and then BAM! Part 3! WOW! What an ending!

The story development with all of the sub-plots and characters was just excellent. I did not want this to end... I feel like this ought to be a novel!

And I feel like there should be references to Avatar / Solace / the first 'First Citizen' Harriet Wilkins in-game. This is just fantastic and adds a completely new dynamic to the game. Story development and plot are sort of lacking in GA atm (well, after the tutorial, anyway)

Again I say this is excellent. I want more.

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Fri Mar 05, 2010 8:41 am

Sycarius

Joined: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:20 pm
Posts: 2298
Location: Near HiRez :)

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

I'm looking forward to this being "fleshed out" in-game with Sandstorm and future updates.

I'd like to have a massive fight with Markov.

I'd also like for Solace to become "self aware" of the monster he created.

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Tue Mar 23, 2010 8:22 pm

RealityMine

Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2009 1:37 am
Posts: 8

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

we're going to have Dr. Solace in-game you think?

Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:26 am

Galizur

Joined: Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:37 am
Posts: 36
Steam Gamer Name: Akrasjel Lanate

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

Awesome

Wed May 26, 2010 2:49 pm

Coldkill

Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:30 am
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Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

Absolutely brilliant! The ending was fantastic, really enjoyed the series.

Fri May 28, 2010 5:21 pm

GotBanned

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Joined: Fri Jun 12, 2009 9:33 am
Posts: 15
Steam Gamer Name: Shady

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

Can we please get a Global Agenda novel? I just know it would be one of those books I literally don't stop reading until its finished.

Fri Jul 16, 2010 3:15 am

HiRezDuke

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Joined: Thu Jul 15, 2010 1:07 pm
Posts: 5244
Location: Hi-Rez

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

Epic wrote:

Can we please get a Global Agenda novel? I just know it would be one of those books I literally don't stop reading until its finished.

Not exactly a novel, but check out what Andur has done over here:

viewtopic.php?f=127&t=16572

Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:42 am

vindicated16

Joined: Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:54 pm
Posts: 19

Re: Fiction - Avatar, Part III - Martyr

that was absolutely an awesome story!luvvved it!i hope there will be more!

oh and by the way i dont think agatha died.....isnt she in global agendas launch trailer?

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Me, myself, and I are sick and tired of all these other multiple personalities in our head, mooching off our brain power. We've decided to start charging rent."

Tue May 03, 2011 5:06 pm